When the rhythm is high
No one can stop you to beat the sky!
When the motion is fast,
you understand that you need not stand aghast!
When you take a dip to hold your head high,
you swim the mass of water,
...your tear wiped!
When the mind is strong,
the life is in your hands
and you go long and on!
Nice work......i m sure u will keep it up if u wl keep listening to my ideas.....lolz....
ReplyDeleteJokes apart.....da msg in the poem is really inspirational....and u kno to whom......:-)
@ radha... shall surely keep ur points on mind! :)
ReplyDeletehmmm..inspiring..inspiring indeed. I hope that the feelings that arise after reading the lines can be sustained. Very well written.
ReplyDelete@ Asi... Thanks dude :)
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