A flawed test tube baby,
A flawed ridiculous mind,
A flawed obnoxious environment,
A flawed reserved mindset,
A flawed harmful immaturity,
A phase to be passed,
A wound to be healed,
A face ready with grace,
A mind as fresh as water,
A strength as tough as rock,
But will the destiny give me a chance?
Gr8 Gr8 Gr8 stuff.....really impressed!!
ReplyDeleteyep.. it'll don't worry. All u need is willpower and determination. Well written. A feeling of being irritated from within reveals in this poem.
ReplyDeleteSteely determination...... n then evrything wud b possible.. Nice one
ReplyDeleteV well written , do try some humourous stuff , all of us need it a lot
ReplyDelete@ Rashi...thanks a lot honey :)
ReplyDelete@ Krishu...next one will be humorous one..dedicted to u! pakka..